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When dreams around you shatter
When your world is full of pain
Take heart! Be strong!
Stand firm and rise again

When all the darkness shuns you
When your friends forsake your name
Don't cry! Fear not!
Stand firm and rise again

When shadows lay guilt on you
When the world says you're to blame
Be bold! Step forth!
Stand firm and rise again

When you've lost touch with reality
When you feel like you're insane
Behold! the Night is ending
Stand firm and rise again
Theme 20: Fortitude.

^_^ Yaaaaaay! This is another I like. It flows well, makes sense, the rhyming isn't forced . . . Contentedness!
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Cattalia Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
::like::
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writerwithasword Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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wolfish-enigma Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
This piece makes me happy, not gonna lie. It's a really nice inspirational piece, and I think it fits the theme spectacularly well. (And all I can picture is someone delivering it in a totally dramatic manner; think Braveheart-speech style.) :D
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writerwithasword Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011  Student Writer
Hahaha, thanks! And that coming from someone who doesn't like poetry is just . . . I don't even know what, but it makes me really pleased. :D

Heh, I had actually thought of one line from the new Robin Hood (never seen it and kinda don't want to but I've heard this one line from the trailers) while I was writing this. I think it goes something like "Rise and rise again until lions become lambs."
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wolfish-enigma Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
Hey, I'll give credit where credit is due, even in poetry! :p
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writerwithasword Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011  Student Writer
LOL, well thank you (again). ;P
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princesscharming101 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
Nice rhyme scheme! It's not forced at all, and the theme comes across very clearly! Well done!
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writerwithasword Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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princesscharming101 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
You're welcome!
:D
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ilike2draw Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011   Writer
So true. Just keep going. :D
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